The Love Chains
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Kept in Bondage
I want to dedicate the inspiration of this poem to Princess Prisca
My bondage is the chains of your love
wrapped all over me
when I read the words you write
It's like falling into the sea
These chains are heavy
Deeper and deeper I go down
I claw and gasp for air
Please don't let me drown
Your love, it holds me
The chains won't let me go
I can't escape this love
You know this is so
When I touch the bottom
i feel your hold...
as it covers my heart
the waters are so cold
I can't escape the pain
Inside,...Oh woe is me
These locks on my heart
Only you hold the keys
Release me from this bondage
Take away this fear
I can't wait no longer
Love was never here
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Beautiful Michael, Reminds me of the lyric, " Take these chains from my heart and set me free " Love the photos too.. Bravo...
For me, this piece is all about the last stanza--
Release me from this bondage
Take away this fear
I can't wait no longer
Love was never here
Beautiful work!
cleaner3, Michael (The Arch Angel),
Thank you for one of the most beautiful, meaningful, touching and 'freeing' poems that I have ever inspired.
Thank you for delivering a message from Jesus... (Sweet Relief) has set me free, it has set me free indeed!!!!
Much Love, Michael!!
I love the photos, you tell a story with those alone.
God Bless You...
(Voted way up and useful and beautiful and awesome and more than interesting.)
Ciao...Princess Prisca
A very beautiful and heartfelt poem, I love it and your pictures as well! Voted up!!
I read this and thought 'yup, that first heartbreak is the worst one'.
Well expressed.
@ Sweets, thank you for your comments, the pictures do enhance the poem.
@ Fittnezz, thank you for visiting my humble hub, your comments are always welcome.
wow, i am awed by this loving poem...so deem fitting to the Lady Love Princess Prisca...
raciniwa, Thank you for your comments. Princess poetry is very inspiring.She has touched my soul.
Caroline, Hello gorgeous, Your comments are ALWAYS waited for with anticipation. Thank you my sweets.
Ruby, thank you,It seems like everyone likes something different in this poem. All love the photo's.
Thank you, Ruby
Beautiful poem Mike! My heart has felt this way many times. Chained and drowning, falling deeper and deeper into a cold and menacing sea. and the one who holds the key just stands there and watches me go down...
Thank you , my sweet Nikki. I know how you feel, I am just like you. It's just my way of letting out my emotions.
Yessss! I love it.
Lia, my beautiful dancer, your sweet smile brings such joy to my dreams
Broken and Dreaming...
I guess you touched me again! Wow!
Thank you, your comments were missed.
I am excited to be back! May even write a hub soon... lol
Did you see my attempt at poetry? You inspired me to write it..
What are you talking about ? where is it? I want to see it!!!
I forgot... Its on another site... sorry. I will try one here for you to see just how awful I am at it! giggle.
Cleaner3 is a wonder
Or is that a wander?
The weather he never seems to be under
Though his mind may be over yonder
Finding words that he can plunder
Low self-esteem he puts asunder!
Sapphire, my lovely,see you can do it. let me give you a tip.
write down your first line and then your second and then just refine the words as you go to the next line and so on. This is a good start. Now tell me your real feelings. LOL
I think I may continue with "regular" writing for a while longer. lol
You are beautiful which ever way you decide to go.!!!
carolinemd21 Level 7 Commenter 3 months ago
Beautiful poem Michael. Very creative. I love the photos too. My favorite lines are
"My bondage is the chains of your love
wrapped all over me
when I read the words you write
It's like falling into the sea"
Gorgeous!